~ ~ ~
As the crowd flowed and moved through,
Everyone a drop in a sea of green
Taking tiny steps ahead
Shoulder to shoulder
The telegraphic words and looks
Transmitting meanings and messages
Through the deafening roar
A nod of reassurance
A tiny smile
~ ~ ~
The crowd grew greater and wider
And in an errant second they were pulled apart,
Separated by the sea,
Tiny and black clad among the trees,
She watched him happily engulfed, foam on the wave,
She lost sight of him
The crowd took him
And she stood there thinking
“This wholesome crowd will protect him”
“He will be safe”
~ ~ ~
She waited
And waited
And didn’t hear the key turning in the lock
And couldn’t hear his familiar footsteps down the hall
And melancholy swiftly turned to despair,
She became a soldier searching
The young man who was last seen wearing a green ribbon
She looked
High and low
Low and low
She asked “Have you seen my boy?”
“He was wearing a green ribbon”
Days
Weeks
A month
~ ~ ~
The news came
Stark and short
And the crowds gathered again
Hailing the end
Carrying gladiola
Wearing black ribbons
~ ~ ~
The mother looked in
The sleeping boy forgetting to breath
The shroud framing his man’s shape
Softly she said “Wake up Sohrab”
Her life’s dread and grief ahead
As the crowd prayed
The smell of camphor and rosewater
Mixed with the sound of sobs and muffled tears
Marked the start of a barren life
The life of the mother without her son.
8 comments:
Nazy jon, it seems that you're really back this time :) so good to see you writing again.
Dear Kaveh:
I'm sooooo sorry. I am so new at this comments moderation business on my blogs. I went to publish your very kind comment and instead I clicked on "Reject!" I thank you very much for your encouraging words. Whereabouts are you Kaveh?
Here I copy and paste your kind comment from the email announcement of it. Thank you again and please forgive me. Nazy
"کاوه has left a new comment on your post "Last Seen Wearing A Green Ribbon":
Even a "heavy heart" has some advantages, the first being pushing the artist to create... "
Sweet Daisy:
Yes, I'm back sweetheart. And I have missed you very much. I hope all is well with you my friend.
Kisses,
Nazy
Dear Nazi,
Thanks for backing up my comment! In my 19th century lifestyle, these things happen in a daily basis whenever the medium is anything other than paper! I'm in the last month of my student life in Stirling, a small city empty of Iranians, in Scotland and should travel to unknown soon, who knows maybe finally somewhere back to writing...
One of the reasons I very much like your blog and writing style is that it reminds me the possibility of writing/telling stories based on simple daily events or feelings, and the fact that lots of story raw materials are always available for a creative mind (for the same reason I always liked Chekhov). Oh, this feeling of reading English stories dabbed with a fresh Persian scent is also incredibly pleasant!
Please pardon me for going overboard in writing a comment!
Regards, کاوه
Oh, Sorry that for the second time I wrote your name with i at the end instead of Y. No need to publish this comment, please just accept my apologies.
Regards,
Kaveh
Nazyjoon,
Heartbreaking. You've been MIA for some time from things. Are you ok?
Nancy
Beautiful! I am happy you are back.
beautiful! I am happy you are back..
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